spiralated (spiralated) wrote in young_poets,

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frozen in the lock of your gaze
staring at a reflection
siting and wondering if the words written in haste
were words written in truth

thats all so far..
i'm a bit slow.
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That's a really good poem!
erm thanks.

i odnd't really considere it a poem though. jjust a not so prowse -like collection of words. really poetry escapes me of late.

actually any writting that isn't technical writing is a blur for me though i'll try to post for you
No problem chickie. :D And please do, post when you can. :)